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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 5:52 am | |
| I say that everyone can be deep. Therefore I'm making a poem corner, where you can post small poems and maybe discuss things. This is a small thing I made. Please comment what you think. My life I have a girlfreind. I love her. Do you know what love is? Love is wonderful. In life there's a lot of things you can't do. But if you keep trying you can make it. Everbody have a purpose. I know my purpose. It's something really hard. Something that is a really big challenge. Keeping my love happy. So a poem corner. If you feel like it please post you poems here. It will be a pleasure reading it. | |
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Kari-chan Admin
Number of posts : 530 Age : 35 Location : Everywhere O_O Registration date : 2008-05-06
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 11:11 am | |
| That's pretty good! The Thing is I think its more under Arts under writting..when i put it up ~_~ | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 1:48 pm | |
| Thank you kari ^__^ I write little by little >__> | |
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Kari-chan Admin
Number of posts : 530 Age : 35 Location : Everywhere O_O Registration date : 2008-05-06
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 1:49 pm | |
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truebanks Newbie
Number of posts : 36 Age : 31 Location : BElVI Registration date : 2008-05-17
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 1:57 pm | |
| i dont like poems... sometimes they just creep out... so i typicaly just pout... i hate that old line>_< even if its used all the time... im a poet and i didnt know it so corny.. i only know one word that rhymes with corny... im not saying it... too bad | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:02 pm | |
| It's hard to force a poem out. If you get inspiration it you write it down. May life gaze it's light upon you for if you ever feel down think of this: There are people in the world who loves you. There are people in the world that hates you. But weither your mood is up or down There will always be one there for you Maybe not in body, but in your heart. ~Malick
lol I tried XD | |
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truebanks Newbie
Number of posts : 36 Age : 31 Location : BElVI Registration date : 2008-05-17
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:06 pm | |
| Grammer... poems ignore alot of rules... wether ur talking abour dogs that drules.... i cant spell... i wont go to sweet corn but no matter what alot of ppl... fail at grammer... i suck at this im done... | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:07 pm | |
| I won't go to sweet corn XDXDXDXD | |
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truebanks Newbie
Number of posts : 36 Age : 31 Location : BElVI Registration date : 2008-05-17
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:09 pm | |
| i wont go to sweet corn ... lol sweet corn | |
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Kari-chan Admin
Number of posts : 530 Age : 35 Location : Everywhere O_O Registration date : 2008-05-06
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:10 pm | |
| In the wake from what I see Theres a light beyond my reach Although i may try To catch what seems to fly There is no way I can follow where it will lay Not knowing even what it is I want it so bad so one day I will go to the place where it has layed ------> end Katchow! | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:11 pm | |
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truebanks Newbie
Number of posts : 36 Age : 31 Location : BElVI Registration date : 2008-05-17
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:11 pm | |
| - Kari-chan wrote:
- In the wake from what I see
Theres a light beyond my reach Although i may try To catch what seems to fly There is no way I can follow where it will lay Not knowing even what it is I want it so bad so one day I will go to the place where it has layed ------> end Katchow! that was a Pop bottles good poem | |
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Kari-chan Admin
Number of posts : 530 Age : 35 Location : Everywhere O_O Registration date : 2008-05-06
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:12 pm | |
| Thankies I just made it up as I typed xDD | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:14 pm | |
| That was awesome improvisation ^__^ *applauses* | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:18 pm | |
| We are the start We are the past We are the now We are the future We are the end ~Malick | |
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Kari-chan Admin
Number of posts : 530 Age : 35 Location : Everywhere O_O Registration date : 2008-05-06
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:19 pm | |
| Creepy but true Malick xDD (Almost put -pinu O_O)) | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:22 pm | |
| Poems are pretty fun really ^__^ | |
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Kari-chan Admin
Number of posts : 530 Age : 35 Location : Everywhere O_O Registration date : 2008-05-06
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:28 pm | |
| yesh they are --- Watchen the sun move up and down can't figure out if I see a cow now someone once told me I need a life So I looked at them and called them a sow ----->end O that ones a bit weird O_O | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:31 pm | |
| "Everytime I see her I fall. Deeper and deeper." "When that happens we'll be there with you. We will catch you when you fall. We may not be there with our bones and flesh but with our hearts." This is a true thing that happened me. We had this conversation. He and I... | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:32 pm | |
| That was kinda strange indeed XD | |
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Kari-chan Admin
Number of posts : 530 Age : 35 Location : Everywhere O_O Registration date : 2008-05-06
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:38 pm | |
| hahaha and nice convo O_O | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:40 pm | |
| It was longer ^__^ It was really "dramatic"... I wish I would remember more T__T | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 2:46 pm | |
| I look outside. There is a rainbow. I ask myself, how can it be so colorful? In school they say it's the light reflections. It's science. Science is the future. It helps people. It kills people. It make people sad. It makes people happy. It destroys. Noone can see the future. But everybody can pray for it. ~Malick | |
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Kari-chan Admin
Number of posts : 530 Age : 35 Location : Everywhere O_O Registration date : 2008-05-06
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sat May 17, 2008 3:32 pm | |
| A rainbow A rainbow Shining it's glorious colors A big one a Small one i see them all the time just a floatin in me milk | |
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Malick Knights
Number of posts : 3551 Age : 30 Location : Happy town. Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: A poem corner Sun May 18, 2008 4:39 am | |
| Floatin in me milk =3
I see a girl. She stands in the corner. She's alone. She's holding a bag. She's crying. People who walks by just stare. I walk up to her. She looks at me with those deep blue eyes. I ask her, "What has happened?" She smiled and wiped her tears. She answered softly "I met you." ~Malick | |
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